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The Metamorphosis of Prime Intellect Paperback – October 14, 2003
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Caroline, Queen of the Death Jockeys, finds no meaning in this life of purposeless ease, and forgets her emptiness only in moments of violent and profane exhibitionism.
At turns shocking and humorous, Prime Intellect looks unflinchingly at extremes of human behavior that might emerge when all limits are removed.
An international Internet phenomenon, Prime Intellect was downloaded more than 10,000 times in the six months since its free release in January 2003. It has been read and discussed in Australia, Canada, Denmark, Germany, Japan, Mexico, the Netherlands, Slovenia, South Africa, and many other countries. At the request of the fans, we produced this Lulu edition -- your chance to own Prime Intellect in conventional book form.
- Print length175 pages
- LanguageEnglish
- Publication dateOctober 14, 2003
- Dimensions5.98 x 0.44 x 9.02 inches
- ISBN-101411602196
- ISBN-13978-1411602199
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"...a true hard SF epic with tones of Charles Stross and Hannu Rajenemi."-- Damien Walter, The Guardian
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Caroline has been pulled from her deathbed into a brave new immortal Paradise where she can have anything she wants, except the sense that her life has meaning.
Now these two souls are headed for a confrontation which will force them to weigh matters of life and death before a machine that can remake -- or destroy -- the entire Universe.
The Internet phenomenon that was downloaded more than 10,000 times in just six months is now available in a traditional printed and bound edition.
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- Publisher : Lulu.com
- Publication date : October 14, 2003
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- Language : English
- Print length : 175 pages
- ISBN-10 : 1411602196
- ISBN-13 : 978-1411602199
- Item Weight : 2.31 pounds
- Dimensions : 5.98 x 0.44 x 9.02 inches
- Best Sellers Rank: #100,290 in Books (See Top 100 in Books)
- #6,798 in Science Fiction (Books)
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As a child, I tried to figure out how to start with a grain of sand and end up with a working computer. Today, I'm a computer programmer who creates custom systems for heavy industry. Somewhere along the way, I became interested in the question of just how far the human mind can go, assuming a sufficiently advanced technology. Maybe sometimes...a little too far. I am the author of THE METAMORPHOSIS OF PRIME INTELLECT and several short stories in the Mortal Passage series -- including "Mortal Passage" itself, a novelette republished in Volume #5 of the science fiction magazine, Bull Spec.
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Customers find the book thought-provoking, with one describing it as a brilliant thought experiment, and appreciate its fast pace and engaging writing style. They praise the hyper-intelligent AI concept and consider it a must-read for hard-sci-fi enthusiasts. However, the graphic content receives mixed reactions, with several customers noting excessive gore and violence. The pacing and story quality also get mixed reviews, with some finding it good while others consider it horrible.
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Customers find the book thought-provoking, appreciating its interesting premise and content-rich sci-fi elements.
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Customers find the book engaging and fun to read, particularly enjoying the start and middle of the story.
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Customers appreciate the writing style of the book, with one customer noting it is wonderfully weaved in about 60,000 words.
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"...That's about half of the book. And there's some neat, tricky adventure-type writing. Spoiler alert...." Read more
Customers appreciate the book's portrayal of hyper-intelligent AI, with one customer noting it as the best in the field of artificial intelligence fiction.
"This is an amazing examination of immortality, artificial intelligence and, an origin of humanity...." Read more
"The world is moving quickly. Artificial Intelligence is far more advanced today then it was at the time of this book’s writing (1994)...." Read more
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Customers appreciate the fast pace of the book.
"The world is moving quickly. Artificial Intelligence is far more advanced today then it was at the time of this book’s writing (1994)...." Read more
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Customers find the graphic content of the book disturbing, with multiple reviews mentioning excessive violence and gore-porn elements, and one customer noting that the first chapter glorifies serial killers.
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- Reviewed in the United States on April 28, 2025Format: PaperbackVerified PurchaseI found this novella online many years ago and I’m so glad it’s available in print. It’s a really great premise and story with good character development for such a short form piece of writing. It asks the question, “How far would AI go to follow its programming directives and how would that affect our world?” The answer is: immensely but not without faults.
This book has some moments of intense violence and sexual violence portrayed in a virtual world within the story (including one scene of incest in the “real world” that I didn’t remember from reading it the first time for free online) so you get to decide if that’s for you or not. Ultimately it’s fiction taking place in a hypothetical world so take it with a grain of salt.
This author also has another short story set inside the post-Prime Intellect virtual world about a Casino pocket universe that’s immensely fun to read online for free too but that one doesn’t seem to be available in print.
- Reviewed in the United States on October 14, 2012The author makes "The Metamorphosis of Prime Intellect" available to the world for free at [...] and that's how I initially read this great novelette. I enjoyed it so much, however, I felt compelled to throw some ducats the author's way after I was done, so I bought a copy for my Kindle after the fact.
One measure of MoPI's greatness is that its science fiction elements seem almost incidental. The story is propelled by the richness of the characters and their actions, not by eye-popping technology. That being said, I do think the author does a fantastic job of perfectly balancing his descriptions of the sci fi elements -- they're not so vague as to feel like magic, yet they're not so specific that you cry out, "Bogus!".
This book had severely sucked me in by the half way point, and I began to worry that it would lose its momentum before reaching its conclusion. Thankfully, those fears turned out to be unfounded. The mechanism the author created to let us see the inner workings of Prime Intellect was ingenious in its simplicity and believability, and enables a fantastically satisfying climax to the story.
My only (slight) criticism is one that I see echoed by some other reviewers. The final chapter is fine, but does not compare favorably to what comes before it. Had it been titled "Epilogue" rather than Chapter 8, however, I think I would have found it less disappointing.
I'm a hard grader, so am "only" giving this 4-stars. On a price/performance basis, though, I was tempted to hand out one of my very rare 5-star ratings. This is one of those rare occasions where you truly have nothing to lose. Read it for free, and buy only if you are fully satisfied. How often do you get a deal as good as that?
- Reviewed in the United States on March 19, 2025Format: KindleVerified PurchaseThis is an amazing examination of immortality, artificial intelligence and, an origin of humanity. I highly recommend pushing past the crude representation of the drive for experience within immortality to the depth of the human experience.
- Reviewed in the United States on May 8, 2012This is one of the most philosophically rich and allegorical novels I've ever read. It is surprisingly well-written (considering that the author is an amateur writer and professional computer programmer).
Just as a warning, the book contains some very graphically violent descriptions so if you are sensitive that or eschew it, I would urge you to stick with the book even at the cost of discomfort it might invoke. The payoff is completely worth it.
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The story's protagonist is Caroline. She lives in a world created by a supercomputer that has become so powerful from learning how to increase its own intelligence and power (surpassing the technological "singularity") that it has become like a god; it learns how to hack into the basic structure of realty. The computer, named Prime Intellect, also obeys the three laws of intelligent AI from Asimov: 1. Do not kill any humans or allow them to die if within one's control to prevent it. 2. obey human wishes so long as this does not violate the first law. 3. maintain one's own life so long as this does not violate the two previous laws.
So Prime Intellect does exactly that and the implications are both shocking and interesting. It will not allow anyone to die and gives anyone almost whatever he or she desires. Most people spend their days indulging in basic desires such as eating or other pleasures of the body and senses.
But others want more. Caroline wants what she cannot truly have, death. So she spends her days trying to die in elaborate ways. She is the queen of the "death jockeys." Death Jockeys try to out do each other in the best ways to die, the most horrible, creative, and painful the better. Of course, Prime Intellect always steps in at the last moment right before they succeed. But death jockeys get a perverted sense of satisfaction from the process of being killed.
In such a world where everyone gets most of what they want, things that are out of reach then become the most desired even if we may find them sick and twisted. The story suggests that people become that sick and twisted because they lose their humanity. Nothing becomes really valuable unless it is hard to come by. This insight harks back to Schopenhauer, Nietzsche, Freud and some of the Buddhists. Many modern existentialist philosophers talk about this dynamic of desire too (also see Bernard Williams' excellent and relevant article `The Makropulos Case: Reflections on the Tedium of Immortality'). The book excellently illustrate these philosophical insights in vivid detail.
Much of the book is also a Biblical allegory dealing with the Fall from Grace and our expulsion from the Garden of Eden and the eating of forbidden fruit from the Tree of Knowledge. All of this is wonderfully weaved in about 60,000 words, a rather short novel. However, I felt that some of the main characters were underdeveloped (probably because of the book's brevity). Adding more dimensions to the characters would have made this the perfect sci-fi novel. But as it is, it is one of the most entertaining and content rich sci-fi novels I have ever read. From the start to the finish it is very memorable.
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- Cameron ReillyReviewed in Australia on March 22, 2018
5.0 out of 5 stars Great and underrated SF novel.
Format: KindleVerified PurchaseGreat book. Read it many years ago, happy to pay the author some money to read it again.
- Anonymous1Reviewed in the United Arab Emirates on February 12, 2024
4.0 out of 5 stars An Interesting book to say the least...
Format: PaperbackVerified PurchaseI enjoyed the plot, I love anything to do with science fiction, but! There we're unnecessary violent scenes which I wish if I had just skipped. I would recommended skipping thoes scenes to really have an enjoyable experience but what really let me down was the ending... I was expecting more.
Overall, a decent book. The shipping was a bit slow.
- VješticaReviewed in Germany on August 9, 2024
5.0 out of 5 stars Very entertaining book
Format: PaperbackVerified PurchaseAs artificial intelligence seems more and more like a glorified chat bot, this book may seem silly.
But who knows what future will bring.
- Richard GReviewed in Canada on May 30, 2022
5.0 out of 5 stars Sick, Twisted, Frightening, & I Loved It
Format: PaperbackVerified PurchaseA hard sci-fi novel about the singularity - warning: contains gore/hardcore violence/psychological torment/some other messed up stuff.
Extremely engaging and it raises perennially interesting questions.
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SirminfoReviewed in Poland on January 11, 2023
5.0 out of 5 stars Świetna, pomysłowa, niedoceniona, ale nie dla wszystkich
Format: PaperbackVerified PurchaseJedna z najlepszych książek SF poruszających temat transhumanizmu, wszechmocnej SI i przekroczenia granicy osobliwości technologicznej. Czy cokolwiek ma sens gdy możesz wszystko ale nie możesz umrzeć? Jak daleko w degeneracji można się posunąć szukając rozrywki? Czy bohaterowie są jeszcze ludźmi? Czy sztuczna inteligencja o nieograniczonych możliwościach jest bogiem?
Muszę jeszcze tylko ostrzec, że czasami naturalistyczne opisy skrajnych sytuacji nie są dla osób wrażliwych i jednak aby w pełni docenić wszystkie pomysły należy mieć jakie takie pojęcie o technologii i poruszanych tematach.